March to the Gates for the J6’ers

This song has a strong emotional core, focusing on themes of justice, freedom, and solidarity. It uses vivid imagery and repetition to effectively convey a sense of resistance and unity. The emotional appeal is strong, especially with lines like “We will not stop until they’re all free.”

To improve, consider clarifying the message a bit more for listeners unfamiliar with the specific events and tweaking the flow in some parts for better rhythm. Adding some variety in the themes could also deepen the song’s impact.